Monday 20 March 2017

Trailer 2nd Draft Feedback

"The drum sound is really distorted and I don't think it's loud enough."
"Would be better to put the finding of the phone before the text messages."
"Put all the poster shots at the end together."
"I like the church shots."
"Make the subtitles short and more simple."
"The shot on the astro turf cuts in too quickly on the villain."
"Change the subtitle as it has incorrect grammar."
"Put a filter on the knife scene so the red paint looks more like blood."
"Put a longer pause in the music on the astro turf so there's more tension."

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