Poster 1st Draft Feedback

"- The pink on the lips doesn't quite go, different colour maybe.
- The grass (is it even grass?)needs to blend more at the top and not the bottom, you can see part of the top though the bottom of it.
- The texture effect is cool.
- Could the title be bigger? It doesn't really stand out at the moment 
- did you intentionally leave the eyes seen through the crosses? maybe it should stand out more or less."

"The poster is extremely well made, and looks like it could come straight from a cinema. 

I do think that you should add a question mark on the end of 'How far would you go' instead of an ellipsis, 
this is the only critique that I have, other than that I find it a very very strong poster." 

"I feel like the x's could be more solid around the pupils and add that oomph/emphasis ish. It looks like it's floating on her face rather than something like graffiti, but I guess it you make it solid, it kinda falls into the horror movie poster stereotype.

"Title needs to be enlarged. Institution information needs to be added. Has a good hidden element that makes people want to watch it. Has a nice gothic look to it. The Mis-En-Scene is very effective."

"It's quite good for a first draft. If I were you, I'd keep this for the next line of work. Just needs a little more polishing; better quality image, and a different letter font."